TITLE: The Last Renaissance
SUMMARY:Hyperborea is a realm where those endowed with magic dictate the 'mundane' society’s best interests. Meet Isaac, womanizer, escape artist, and head of a not-so-mundane group of inventors who will uncover the true nature of their Arcane superiors
RATING: T for fantasy violence and varying sexual themes, possibly M for later chapters.
I've got this grand thing planned out but eh, The Fantasy Genre's fairly competetive and I'm kind of falling short despite rewrites. Not sure what I'm looking for but hell, I've got nothing to lose. Thanks for your time and potential interest.
Rating: T ('adult themes')
Summary: In the midst of war, a star descends from the skies to save her hunted sisters. For a while, she's protected by the man she loves - but what happens when he decides to leave her? The war is ending, the hunters are closing in, who's going to save her now?
I would really appreciate it if someone would give me some constructive criticism. I am not very sure what's wrong exactly... But I spent a lot of time on it and I would like to hear some opinions. Thank you! :)
I found this comminuty out of sheer boredom and decided to join. I'm a writer for Fanfiction and I haven't exactly finished any of my stories yet (writer's block heh) but I'm also a writer for FictionPress.
Right now I haven't gotten far and I'm not really sure if I'm doing alright.
So if you could check out my story it would be greatly appreciated:)
My not so charming prince
Summary: Every girl’s Prince Charming was handsome, polite, intelligent and utterly Charming. But Erica’s just happened to be a real jerk with a stick up his arse not to mention his ego’s the size of Russia.
Some Prince he was.
There is nothing charming about a guy who almost runs you over with his car, calls you an idiot and then proceeds to kiss you.
Look on the bright side Erica; at least he’s a good kisser.
The reason I want people to check it is because I'm not so sure that I'm doing it very well. I don't know if whatever is bugging me is the characters, the plot or the setting.
I'm pretty new to fictionpress.com and I'm trying to figure out if there might be some other way to find a beta reader. I've tried and tried to contact the mods about the apparent broken link on the beta reader search option but there seems to be no response. Is there anyone here who can help me?
I hope it wasn't taken down!
Author: Edalene Athene
Rating: T ('adult themes')
Summary: One day a young girl sets free two foreign slaves. This is only the beginning of the momentous events that will utterly alter her sheltered life. A story of love, courage and proving yourself in a time of war. (summary is somewhat rubbish but story is better)
This is my metaphorical baby but I'm not sure where it's headed. I am looking for constructive reviews on each chapter so I know where I need to improve. Also, ideas to fill in gaps would be appreciated.
And now for my shameless plug.
Title: The Dearest Calamity
Rating: T, though it may rise
Summary: When Prince Marcus's ship is caught in a devastating storm, he is saved by a stranger with sea-green eyes. The problem is, she's followed him home and won't leave him alone. A retelling of the Little Mermaid with a twist.
It's not much, but it's my baby and I have much of it planned out already. If you do decide you want to beta, you'd be reading chapters way earlier than the general public (Although I don't know if this is an incentive) and you know...help me. Thank you very much for your time!
Story Title: This Confession
Summary: They've been enemies ever since he pulled down her undies and pushed her into a mud puddle. She's hated him from then on and made sure she never saw his face again. But no, God just couldn't resist making them run into each other. Literally. Ahh Hell.
fictionpress URL here
thanks guys! hope you enjoy (:
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